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And why such a fuss for the Korean makeup?
And why such a fuss over Korean makeup?

- Cover Story

Shinhan Financial Group administers finances, and KOTRA will provide opportunities of working abroad by utilizing overseas network and infrastructure.
Shinhan Financial Group manages finances, and KOTRA will provide opportunities to work abroad by utilizing its overseas network and infrastructure.

- News Desk

Animals are in a tragedy because they are made to put their bodies in a small cage, making it extremely hard to move.
Animals are in a tragic situation because they are forced to live in a small cage, making it extremely hard for them to move.

- In-depth on National

In addition, a refugee can apply for a working after six months of application.
In addition, a refugee can apply for a work visa from six months after the initial application.

- Reportage

An arrogant prince, who denies to help an eldery woman in the middle of the night gets cursed by her and thus turns into a beast.
An arrogant prince, who refuses to help an eldery woman in the middle of the night, gets cursed by her and thus turns into a beast.

- HUFSan’s Voice